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©2007-2009 *Ayem
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Um... so, more giftart to get out of my block. I feel I could have done better... *serious* critique welcome.
Perhaps keeping the pencil lines were a bad idea. Anyway, Sorrow the weird lookin' jackal gone wrong belongs to =maygikal

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Ohwow.

Ayem... that's amazing. The lighting, the shading, the colours, pose, blur... Darn. Beautiful work! I wonder how this guy manages to end up in so many pictures with awesome perspectives. ;)

Brilliant, absolutely brilliant.

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Thankies much! And... that's a good question. Perhaps it's because he's just fun to draw? And easy to experiment with when practicing poses.

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Wow! that's beautiful! I love the shade and prosective. The shine on the eyes is wonderful and I rather like the pencile lines.. it give's it character. :D
Now for the critique. Um, maybe the muzzle is a little short for a jackle? but the main problem I think is the back legs. I think they're bent too much, making them look broken... but the rest of the pic is perfect, and wonderful. ^^ Good Job! <3

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My goodness, they do look bent out of shape, don't they? Thanks for pointing that out. :) And, yeah. It prolly is a bit short. I was trying to conform to May's cute style. But, now that you mention it... a longer snout would have looked better. Thanks for the comment, and citique.

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No problem! ^^ I like the short muzzle though, it just makes him look a little more like a dog then a jackle.

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~For those we have tamed we are responsible for.~
~Bravery isn’t about being fearless, bravery is about continuing on, despite our fears.~
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His face and shoulders up are STUNNING.

Truly gorgeous. The only thing I'm a little unsure of are the back legs, but i can see what you're doing, it's just the facial expression is brilliant. Anyone who gets a piece like that is going to be truly lucky :) And as your style is clear in all your work, I couldn't care less if they were your characters or not!

Oooh, well done you!
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This is so amazing. o__o
I love that pose and that expression, and that shading...wow. I can hardly comment- this's just so incredible. XD;
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holy hell. i love the colors and the awesome pose and the perspective makes it so actiony!
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Wow, that made me go "oooo" out loud.

And I'm at work, and it echoes. ^^

Love the face and the feathers and the pose and the perspective and the PENCIL LINES. <3

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Wow, that's intense...I like it!

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