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Ivoncraft Is See-Through by Ayem Ivoncraft Is See-Through by Ayem
Sorry for the rather... unimpressive picture. I tried to give this abackground, but... guh. Not quite back into drawing yet. Trying to get back into drawing before even attempting to finish commissions. For some reason they're twice as hard as they used to be.

ANYway, made Ivoncraft skeletal again. 'Cause I really think it strengthens his design. Plus skeletons are awesoe to draw.
This is quite awesome. I love the pose and the...ghostly substance coming off him. The swirls are so stylistic, it works really well. I'm also fond of the colours you used and how he LOOKS translucent with the...opacity of his overlaying "skin" over his skeletal structure. Notably how the blue is really dark around his hooves.

I can't see anything wrong with the skeleton itself, perhaps his shoulders jut out a bit far forwards- it looks a bit strange. I love the shape of his ribcage, though. A lot.

My only real crit is that the perspective seems a little off due to the spacing between his legs. I think his hind legs should be a little further apart from one-another to make the pose more believable.

Lovely work. <3 I look forward to seeing more of your art soon!
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Submitted on
September 12, 2009
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