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Dingo White - Hunting Lesson by Ayem Dingo White - Hunting Lesson by Ayem
Lesson one: Every action has a consequence.

I promise I'm not going to become one of those artists who only draws their comic. XD

Critiques are welcome, but unlike the other two, I won't be going back to change things. I've just gotta keep pumping these out, and I can't look back. But any advice I'll definitely take on board for next time. :D
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hahaha. this is full of funningness XD i laughed so bad at the end.
the background colors, specially the sky that becomes ligher, fits perfectly with the red australian floor.

mm, what i would suggest would be putting a bit more of emotion on the "momma"'s face. like making her sign, or just enjoy the feeling of cooking, so she will look even more distracted when she's caught. also on the sixth panel, giving her a scared expression instead of a "oh dang..." expression would be great,
other than that, this is amazing comic, it made me laugh badly! :3
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